Based on the criteria of the essay I would give Nisey Williams essay Why I Hate Britney an A. She begins her assertion about hating Britney with a situation through which she draws an emotional relationship with the reader. This displays an exceptional writing characteristic; she can evoke emotions. Nisey continues to divulge her distaste for Britney Spears citing multiple examples from both popular and almost unheard of resources. Her extensive external examples add to the illustration of Britney’s inappropriate sex appeal.
I don’t know about others but when I watch television and hear the reports of soldiers killed in Iraq in a thirty second time slot followed immediately by a ten minute slot about Britney’s alcoholism I get nauseated. Nisey reminisces upon the many aspects of Britney that cause her disgust and hate with excellent representation. She even covers the other end of the spectrum by stating “in all fairness, Britney’s not the only one.” which is another benchmark of a great writer. Her essay is well-written, cited, and definitely worthy of an A.
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The celebrity culture really aggravates me sometimes, and why the news pays so much attention to it boggles my mind.
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